Analysis of Chained Laments
A dark yet penetrating stare, ice like, freezing glare.
Gargoyles supposedly made of stone.
A lonely moan answers to the unknown.
Moaning inside, growling outside, chained to cold, dead stone.
Hear it? Another sad and piteous moan.
Protectors of their Master's dwelling against evil
Fending off demons sent from the Devil.
How does this creature devise the traverse?
A Gargoyles' spirit inside is even more hideously perverse.
Yet, it is to be used only for obedient good,
to deploy evil away from the master's dwelling of stone or wood.
No way in for evil - no way in except through the Gargoyle's jowls.
A frightening thought, for who knows what lies between teeth and bowels?
The moan again can be heard in the dead of the night.
Lonely Gargoyles chained to the stone cold dwellings, an imposing sight.
Enough has their eyes laid upon the clandestine, enough has the spirit cried,
Maybe it seeks to shed these thoughts of horror and to ease a spirit that has almost died.
I wonder why chains of bondage, if loyalty is not uncertain?
Would Gargoyles flee and become elusive in a rainbow's colored curtain?
Listen! Can you hear it? Laments and groans of Gargoyles chained to cold, dead stone.
This piteous, melodic moan is centuries and centuries old.
And only the spirit within knows who or what possesses the Gargoyles' hold.
Scheme | XAAAA BBCC DDXX EEFF GGA HH |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011100111101 10100111 0101101001 1001101111111 110101011 0101110100110 1011011010 1111001010 0110011101100001 11111110101001 10110011010101111 110110110011011 0100111111011010 0101111001101 101110111010101 0111110100100110101 101111111100110101111 11011110110011010 1110010100011010 10111101011111111 110101110001001 010010011111010011 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,361 |
Words | 259 |
Sentences | 25 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 5, 4, 4, 4, 3, 2 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 48 |
Words per line (avg) | 11 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 176 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 39 |
About this poem
A friend I know loves Gargoyles, so I did a little research on what they are and do. Very sad creatures that are always chained up and basically lookouts for their masters' dwellings. Thus a lamenting poem for Gargoyles lives and just in time for Halloween. Hope you enjoy.
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Written on March 18, 2010
Submitted by emera on October 28, 2022
Modified on April 07, 2023
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