Analysis of captain saleem



My dearest principal CAPTAIN SALEEM
I still remember your saying
When we first met
“Education stander is our first priority
Delivering knowledge having grip is best methodology
If u want to stay here
Than be like a good teacher
Do your best, give your full efforts”
Oh its still fresh
Like its yesterday talk

I was nothing when I was new here
You figure out my talent
And make me sure
Now I am calling my self a Teacher
No doubt,  You the only  reason behind
All the way you taught us
“Honesty  at the number first
Working with sprit,
Having some courage
Will only give you the worth which you deserve

Giving education is not a games of kids
Delivering lecture with out preparation having no mean
A teacher with correct knowledge can only do this
To never go back of your words in every deed
believing in your self is best avenue to lead
Making white board black , copies red
Standing idle, While wasting time
Assigning the task, with out explaining
Than waiting for result while believing it should be flawless
Is not behavior of a person calling him self a TEACHER

Reiterate the rules of where you are working
Love and affectation while admonishing on time
Bringing intonation while Having patient
Makes a seed the perfect  tree
This is the way to make Pakistan healthy”
You never let us to take rest in working hour
You always use to keep every teacher in single line
You were always with us in every thin and thick
Albeit you have given us very tough time
But we enjoyed a lot cause it was our learning time

Your lessons makes us to shine in every BFC
What ever the worth we have,
What ever the respect we have
You the only one behind
The reason Working from dawn to dusk
Its too hard to say you good bye
Although we never want this day in our life
All I want to say you thank you
I haven’t enough words to express your magnanimous
And yes Captain Saleem you  deserve More than that

A forthright man, never afraid of dawn
Well dress with stupendous personality
In his 70’s but extreme red blooded
I am not only one, we were 50
Who are still Acknowledging “ No one like him”
We will always keep  you in our prays
May you always stay vigorous and healthy
May the tough time never knock your door
May no ailment ever cross your road
May happiness always remain in your way

Written by Daughter of CH KHALID MEHMOOD
Keep remember me in your prays


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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 2,372
Words 448
Sentences 1
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10, 10, 10, 10, 2
Lines Amount 62
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 269
Words per stanza (avg) 64

About this poem

today i am consider a very good teacher and he the person behind , although as a institute principal he have given me very tough time but this tough time help me to win the best teacher award

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Written on October 06, 2022

Submitted by maryamkh191 on October 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Thank you sir saleem

Father name : Ch- Khalid Mehmood Date of birth : 19-1-1994 I.D card no : 61101-8437960-6 Religion : Islam Language : Urdu, Punjabi, English E-Mail : Maryamkh191@gmail.com Nationality : Pakistani TEACHER BY PROFESSIONAL I am writing poems since from my child hood (200 plus) and i tried my best to improve my self with passage of time more…

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