Analysis of Embers

Cody John Waine 1986 (Portland, Oregon)



Creature of habit
Prone to self sabotage
I think I'm OK
Mesmerized by this mirage
What's it going to take?
Always cutting my own throat
Blew it all again
It's all going up in smoke

Trying to extinguish the flames I've fed
Like a candle burning from both ends
Out of the ashes the embers ascend
Burning me to the wick again

I'm the best of my worst enemies
The championship belongs to me
I always want to be alone
But I can't do this on my own
I can't remember making the scratch
But I'm always the one holding the match

Trying to extinguish the flames I've fed
Like a candle burning from both ends
Out of the ashes the embers ascend
Burning me to the wick again


Scheme xaxaxxbx CDEB xxffgg CDEB
Poetic Form Song
Metre 10110 11110 11111 101101 111011 110111 11101 1110101 1010100111 101010111 1101001001 10110101 101111100 01000111 1111101 11111111 110101001 111011001 1010100111 101010111 1101001001 10110101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 665
Words 133
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 4, 6, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 32

About this poem

I've been addressing my mental health and my own problems.

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Written on November 05, 2022

Submitted by Cody.johnwaine on November 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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