Analysis of Mad Skies

Sean^45 2000 (Limpopo)



Smiles turned into frowns and this burst bubbles
cases turn cold as the days shrine into the night
winters are just screaming to be saved from themselves
summers burning too hot for everyone's liking

Her breath muting the sounds of my young whines
Clocks chipping away at the times of our youth
into adulthood we enter with longing tails
future has eluded us from what we thought it would be

love propelled the trauma out of our hearts
color without meaning yet they symbolize more
world no longer what it were a second ago
hang from the morals of the past we pessimistic


Scheme XXXX XXXX XXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1101101110 101110110101 101110111101 10101111010 0110011111 110011011101 01011101101 10101011111111 10101011101 10011011101 111011001001 110101011010
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 575
Words 107
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 39
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 156
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

this is for the days that the world tries their best to try and take what God has given you!

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Submitted by ts.31348 on November 05, 2022

Modified on April 30, 2023

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