Analysis of Sun & Moon II



You don’t need anyone to light you up.
Don’t ever let anyone else become
your sun, you are your own sun.
I believe that it is necessary to find
your moon, the person that you
reflect off of, and the person that you
fall into special kind of gravity with,
but no one should ever become your sun.
You are your own sun and you must
be your own source of light and life,
because once someone else
becomes your sun, and once that
sun falls into another’s orbit,
all of the flowers you’ve planted
shrivel up and die in darkness.
You must be your own sun.


Scheme ABCDEEFCGHIJKLMC
Poetic Form
Metre 111101111 110110101 1111111 10111110011 1101011 0111001011 10110111001 1111100111 11111011 11111101 01111 0111011 1101110 11010110 10101010 111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 556
Words 114
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 16
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 426
Words per stanza (avg) 107
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Written on 2018

Submitted by lifeasalyric on November 04, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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