Analysis of Be You Because I Will Be Me



i was fortunate enough to have an education
i understand the concepts of gains and of failure
i understand the meaning of love and of loss
however, at times, I sit and I wonder about
how much I have tossed

with my blunder of thoughts about
all of the failure
all of the bliss i've experienced -
all the life i've lived
with a life that's not really rude
and with me sometimes being someone i couldn't forgive

something else could trigger the outcome
if we all contemplate once in a while...
for me:

the falsehood of living is never forgiving, and
the people who 'bleed' in front of you will never rust.


Scheme XAXBX BAXXXX XXX XX
Poetic Form
Metre 1110001111010 101010110110 10101011011 101111011001 11111 11101101 11010 110110100 10111 10111101 0110110111001 10111001 111101001 11 011101100100 0101101111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 616
Words 126
Sentences 2
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 5, 6, 3, 2
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 30
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 119
Words per stanza (avg) 28

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the key is authenticity

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Written on October 27, 2022

Submitted by kelly.effler on October 27, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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