Analysis of The Fisherman's Wife
The Fisherman’s Wife
Dusk whispers daydreams of warming her man
And dawn pretends he’s not gone, again.
She loves when he comes home from working away
strong arms embrace her, rough hands touch her face.
But thundering skies rouse newfound fears
of losing her husband, and she fights back the tears.
Yesterday morning, he’d sailed at dawn,
then radioed in as the gusts grew strong.
As his voice, through static, hollow and dry
said he loved her, she tried not to cry.
“A storm’s blowing in, but we’ll be all right
We’re heading in now baby, see you tonight.
She’d swallowed hard, not sure what to say
and hoped for the best in her usual way.
When morning wakens and he hasn’t come home,
lured by lyrics of the wind’s lonely song,
she bundles in gloves and his warm wool coat,
breathes in his scent, and steps out to the cold.
There on the rooftop, mist soggy with brine
flies by a raven, but she pays it no mind
Below, lies a canvas of waterscape scenes
where beauty lies dying like day-old dreams.
The horizon, blurred by the stormy grey haze,
she watches, intently as dawn becomes day.
But her heart feels the truth now, and hope goes away.
The fisherman’s wife whispers “Holy mother I pray,
please end his suffering.” As she speaks, her soul
feels how he needs her. Then the feeling goes,
blows out like a candle left in the wind.
There, in a heartbeat, life beautiful ends.
The angels have buried her husband at sea
leaving her alone with their life’s memories.
She gazes into heaven’s thin empty air,
chapped blue lips whisper a prayer,
words fading to shadows from thoughts,
and she steps away, for the last time,
from the cold widow’s walk.
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 011 110111001 010111101 11111111001 1101011101 110011111 110010011101 10101111 110010111 1111101001 111011111 0110011111 01001101101 110111111 01101001001 110101111 1110101101 1100101111 1011011101 110111011 11010111111 011010111 1101101111 00101101011 11001011011 101101101101 01110101011 11110011101 1111010101 1110101001 100111001 01011001011 10001111100 11001101101 1111001 1101111 011011011 101101 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,689 |
Words | 328 |
Sentences | 17 |
Stanzas | 5 |
Stanza Lengths | 9, 6, 6, 10, 7 |
Lines Amount | 38 |
Letters per line (avg) | 34 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 257 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 60 |
About this poem
This poem is paired with my previous entry, "The Fisherman." This poem conceptualizes the process of losing her husband to his work at sea. I was a fisherman's wife as a young mother, and in this poem I place myself in the shoes of a real woman, first name Kim, whose husband's ship went down during a storm in March 1984 in Montauk, NY.
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Written on September 01, 2022
Submitted by donna.m.simons on October 24, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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