Analysis of lonely another day



paths are made
by people moving towards each other and away
numbers are lost roads are over paved
and somewhere someone's lonely another day
sometimes a man lets his friends
interfere with what he intends
but to me no friend can compare
to a woman's rapturous care
oh, in life's dangers
I wouldn't want to be spared
if my woman couldn't be with me there yea
so, if you find
a woman that stays on your mind
remember where your good times lie
and I'd rather lose a friend
then make a woman cry
paths are made
by people moving towards each other and away
numbers are lost roads are over paved
and somewhere someone's lonely another day


Scheme ABCBddeefgbhhijiABCB
Poetic Form Etheree  (25%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 111 1101001110001 101111101 011100101 0101111 0111101 11111101 10101001 10110 1101111 11101011111 1111 01011111 01011111 0110101 110101 111 1101001110001 101111101 011100101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 634
Words 119
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 506
Words per stanza (avg) 118

About this poem

a band song never released

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Written on November 12, 1989

Submitted by wblsm on October 17, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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