Analysis of That rainy day



It is kept in that drawer, some old sign of the last rain,,

Scattered memories, a story of broken promises,

Scene would have been something else if you would have been with.

without you this rain is even dry today.

Those drops of rain falling on you,

you smells like silk,

Let those drops wet your hairs,

Let those wet swirls touch your cheeks,,

There it was my first and last rain.

scene have been something else if you would have been with.

The night that was spent under Pashmina,

Don't know how many untold things you do with drops,

But what to do if this meeting is not suitable for God ,,

Scene would have been something else if you would have been with.
 without you this rain is even dry today....


Scheme a x B C x x x x a b a x x BC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1110111111011 10100010110100 1111101111111 01111110101 11111011 1111 111111 1111111 11111011 111101111111 01111101 111100111111 111111101110011 1111101111111 01111110101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 746
Words 166
Sentences 7
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 2
Lines Amount 15
Letters per line (avg) 37
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 39
Words per stanza (avg) 10

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A lover who left behind his love is remembering her in a rainy day ...

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Written on October 13, 2022

Submitted by Yaktaa on October 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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