Analysis of Teenagers thought by Aliya Khan



I wish I can go back,
when I want a balloon.
Not everyone's attention ,
not everyone's mood.
When I don't care for anything.
When I don't struggle for everything.
I wanna run away somewhere,
where I don't get compare.
Where I can dance freely over the meadow.
Where I can stare all the beautiful stars.

They be like why , why ,why
Why you come home late.
Why you can't fulfil our desire.
Why you are so stubborn,
You are so mean .
Nobody talk to their parents in that way like you did.
See your neighbour, see your aunt's child. You can't be perfect, you're not our child.

"Mom! I got A grade."
"Shut up!
See your friend's grade, she got A+ .
Aaaaa I told you not to watch TV ,
Not to play games but............
You don't listen to me.
Now see your result".

I wanna fly away,
Where it's just me.
Where nobody can reach me,
Where nobody defeats me.
It's feel like I'm floating in water.
My head hurts, my heart hurts.
But nobody gonna see it........


Scheme XXXXAABBXX XXCXXXX XXXDXDX XDDDCXX
Poetic Form
Metre 111111 111001 110010 1101 1111110 11110110 1101011 111101 1111101001 1111101001 111111 11111 111110010 111110 1111 111110011111 11111111110111101 11101 11 1111110 111111111 11111 111011 11101 110101 1111 11111 11011 111110010 111111 111011
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 979
Words 212
Sentences 25
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 10, 7, 7, 7
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 173
Words per stanza (avg) 46

About this poem

It is a poem that can purely relate today's teenager. How they want to overcome their situation.how their guardian react. How this society see them.

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Written on September 05, 2022

Submitted by khanaliya15614 on September 05, 2022

Modified on May 01, 2023

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