Analysis of Soul Parting
You have given me something
I can't live without;
The part of you,
That help shaped my life.
I'm trying to be brave,
stop asking me to stay;
Now please don't fall apart,
cos I can't face your breaking heart.
Watching you struggle
With every breath you draw,
The strength in me,
Away slowly, it seems to fade;
I wish you could stay;
Just a while longer,
To have those dances,
To toss some stones.
I want to carry on
like everything will be fine,
yet, seeing you slip away,
all I can do is stand and cry;
I try to think of things to say;
Like your words or your memories;
But they don't seem to help,
As the tears just flow.
Perhaps this is life,
Perhaps this has to be,
I just ask for strength;
To journey through life.
Scheme | XXXA XBCC XXDX BXXX XXBX BXXX ADXA |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110110 11101 0111 11111 110111 110111 111101 11111101 10110 1100111 0101 01101111 11111 10110 11110 1111 111101 110111 1101101 11111101 11111111 11111100 111111 10111 01111 011111 11111 11011 |
Closest metre | Iambic trimeter |
Characters | 731 |
Words | 173 |
Sentences | 5 |
Stanzas | 7 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
Lines Amount | 28 |
Letters per line (avg) | 20 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 78 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 20 |
About this poem
I wore this poem thinking about the pain of losing someone dear to death, especially watching helplessly as they pass on.
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Written on March 16, 2022
Submitted by Josparkle1 on September 24, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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