Analysis of Scuffling Rose



Would you water me and watch me grow?
Or pick me and watch me die slow?
I never bowed against the mighty.
But I'm broken down by the hasty.

Among all the phases of my life,
Falling off was the best drive.
The romantic fragrance of mine,
Is cracking me to my deadline.

Once, I was the symbol of sinking love,
To the breathtaking epic beauty and the beast.
She needed life and He needed love,
I fulfilled my prophecy and flagged their majesty.

At the instant you try to seize,
Is the stage to slash your wing.
Bury me endlessly with no trace,
And ache for mercy till the last age.

I can make your beloved prosper bright.
Or make you wonder with sick fright.
It is how you see the sight.
Cause beauty is found inside to alight.


Scheme AABB XXCC DXDB XXXX EEEE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (40%)
Etheree  (25%)
Metre 111010111 11101111 110101010 111011010 011010111 1011011 00101011 1101111 1110101101 10101010001 110101101 1011100011100 10101111 1011111 101100111 011101011 111101101 11110111 1111101 1101101101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 728
Words 163
Sentences 14
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 113
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

This is an attempt to to express the suppressed feeling of an enchanted rose. A Rose tries to explain the agony and the revenge it could take against the cruel and who ill treat other creatures. In the given poem the third Verse is inspired from the fairytale beauty and the beast. The images used is from the internet source. Kindly, Admire the poem in an optimistic way, Thank you.

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Written on September 09, 2022

Submitted by Sanjay26 on September 09, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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