Analysis of Not of the gone, embark success alone.



It is the man who pretends to art
In the mind and in my heart.
He who from ruinous rooms, screams and pulls;
Insecurities, shame and failure he rules.

Mayn't I go and seek the place ever so left behind
For me, and only I love in mind.
Hard; the thought of the man
Of the darkest of alleys;the deepest of valleys I ran.

No! I shall see the light of the night:
For the truth is not far from a deviated desire.
One misunderstood, and misheard they are.
I shan't be stunned of success whuch is of my right

Dwell in the now and not of the gone;
Not of the fails, but of success alone.
The journey of the man for many a times taught me;
Overcome him and his arsenal, I let me be.

He and I, of the same roots, brothers akin.
Dwells he, I've seen, in the rooms of shame and trials,
Not me, I've been, in the glimpse of hope that goes on for miles.
Dwell in the now, and not of the gone;
Learn from the failures, embark success alone.


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Poetic Form
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Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 929
Words 208
Sentences 12
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 5
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 140
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

This poem is a lesson on how one's inner thought and failures in life can affect one's perpective of life. The poem tells you about a man who is in everybody's mind; who is a representative of insecurities, depression and many more. The poet tries to overcome the oppression of this man who is holding him back from progressing in life. The poem applies to all of us.

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Written on September 25, 2022

Submitted by jabezmawia on September 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Jabez Lalzuimawia

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