Analysis of Little letter
I have been away from you and you have been away from me
I stretched my cold beautiful heart to you like an elastic rubber
I reached out to you from voice to voice, step to step but you stayed still and watched me wonder around like a clown
I whispered your name but you shut the doors of your ears from my weak voice
I shivered in pain of been neglected and rejected
I tried covering the wind of mockery but my armored doors and windows got broken and brought down like the walls of Jericho
I lifted my voice like a righteous soul ascending to meet their maker
I buckled my tears and stayed strong
I waved it all like I was ok but am not
I am of a smiling face and a sad one
I am of shattered glass ready to be picked and arranged by your unconditional love
You taking it far from my reach
It's alright to cry and it's ok to be sad and be unwanted
Try to understand beloved, my cold heart is not a weed but a growing plant that has remain stagnant because of thy rejection and stoned smile
Do what pleases you
Do what makes you happy
What pleases me Is loving you and what makes me enthusiastic is your warm smiles from before
Let me drive with you to your home of pain
Let me swim with you in your pool of sorrow
Let me walk every step with you to the burning fire of regret from your ex lovers
When you get this I might be long gone to a journey of searching on how to make you happy
Just wait a little while cause am almost there....
Scheme | ABXX CD BXX XXXC X XAX XDX AX |
---|---|
Poetic Form | |
Metre | 111011101110111 11111001111101010 11111111111111110111001101 11011111011111111 11001110100010 1110001110011101010110011101110 110111010101011110 11011011 111111111111 11101010011 111101101110011101001 11011111 1111011111101010 1101011111101101011101100111010011 11101 111110 11011101011100101111101 1111111111 11111011110 11110011110101010111110 11111111110101101111110 1101011111 |
Closest metre | Iambic octameter |
Characters | 1,447 |
Words | 301 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 8 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 2, 3, 4, 1, 3, 3, 2 |
Lines Amount | 22 |
Letters per line (avg) | 52 |
Words per line (avg) | 13 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 142 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 36 |
About this poem
Little letter is a love poem written with a broken heart of a lover due to rejection and distance that has taken over hearts and minds of the lover.
Font size:
Written on September 30, 2000
Submitted by peacedavid074 on September 30, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
- 1:30 min read
- 1 View
Citation
Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:
Style:MLAChicagoAPA
"Little letter" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 28 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/139670/little-letter>.
Discuss this Peace David poem analysis with the community:
Report Comment
We're doing our best to make sure our content is useful, accurate and safe.
If by any chance you spot an inappropriate comment while navigating through our website please use this form to let us know, and we'll take care of it shortly.
Attachment
You need to be logged in to favorite.
Log In