Analysis of How does it feel?

Qlmynq 2007 (Zenica)



How does it feel to be sheer as glass,
And poisonous like gas?
How does it feel to be so expensive like a diamond?
And be so forgein like a burden?

How does it feel to be smart,
Yet so dumb?
How doesit feel to be imperfect,
And so much perfect?

How does it feel to be watched as a talented kid,
But in the eyes of ur family so mid?

If you don’t know the answer ask me,
Because my whole life no one would let me be.
Never been in the center of the attention.
But expected to be a perfection.


Scheme AAXB XXXX CC DDBB
Poetic Form
Metre 111111111 010011 11111110101010 01111010 1111111 111 11111010 01101 1111111101001 10011110011 111101011 01111111111 101001010010 1010110010
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 524
Words 121
Sentences 10
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 2, 4
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 93
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

This poems represents my life and the way that I have been mistreated by my whole community. I was never good enough and always second choice.

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Written on September 13, 2022

Submitted by Qlmynq on September 13, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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