Analysis of Life Boat
I am a life boat
Floating in a never ending abyss of blackness
Miles upon miles of nothingness
A pitch black darkness
Enough to make somone insane or hallucinate
No paddles or oars to navigate me
This thick black liquid threatens to sink me
Sweat trickles down my back
Ghouls swim by grinning and circling
Ready to attack
Hairline pin like needles poke through
And so begins my descent
I am a life boat
You cling to me to try and get to safety
Each added pound of your suffering
Absorbs into my skin
It's a bitter acid
A kind of quick sand effect
Trying to dry and wither out my soul
So I'm nothing left but a meat suit of somone who froze
I am a life boat
Sinking down into purgatory
My feet already wet and submerged
Desperately looking for a life boat of my own
There is no life raft for the damned nor for the wicked taking rides on the backs of the damned
I am a lifeboat
tethered to the floor of it
black water halfway up my calves
Pleading my case to a father whose followers say
Have faith for the pain and suffering is all just a test
As if he's just watching with a broad smile on his face
Waist deep and panicking
dark liquid traveling fast
Starting to think about death and ways my life will end
What kind of butterfly effects will inevitably come next
I am a life boat
Water up to my chest
My heart is a drum
beating a deafening beat against my ligaments
With every inch drenched
These Ghouls laugh knowing my head is coming next
I am a life boat
Water up to my neck
Morose and settling in drawing my conclusions
Accepting fate that there is nothing left
All the while taking light heading breaths
I am a life boat
Sunken to the depths of what seems like an
Infinitely never ending abyss
Miles upon miles of nothingness.
Scheme | A b B b x c c d e d x x A c e x x x x x A c x x x a x x x f x e x x g A f x x x g A x x x x A x x B |
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Poetic Form | Etheree (24%) Tetractys (20%) |
Metre | 11011 1000101001110 10111100 01110 011110110100 110111101 1111010111 110111 111100100 10101 1111011 0101101 11011 11111101110 110111100 010111 101010 0111101 1011010111 1110110111111 11011 10101100 110101001 1000101011111 1111110111010101101101 1101 1010111 11011111 1011101011001 11101010011101 1111101011111 110100 1101001 1011011011111 111100110100011 11011 101111 11101 1001001011100 110011 11110111101 11011 101111 0101000101010 0101111101 101101101 11011 1010111111 1000101001 10111100 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,836 |
Words | 421 |
Sentences | 1 |
Stanzas | 50 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 50 |
Letters per line (avg) | 28 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 28 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 7 |
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Written on September 28, 2022
Submitted by jamie_v on October 01, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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