Analysis of Make October Last

Eileen Clark 1993 (Htfd. Ct.)



Fall is the most beautiful time of the year
The October air is crisp and remarkably clear
Perfect for long walks on dirt country roads
Easing your mind from troublesome loads

Someone raked up a huge pile of leaves
Right in there front yard, what a big tease
I would gladly jump in if someone insists
Even an adult would find it hard to resist

I try to spend some time outside every single day
One windy night could blow all the leaves away
If I had my druthers I would fill my life with cheer
By making October be the twelve months in a year

Author Eileen Clark 2022


Scheme AABB XXXX CCAA X
Poetic Form
Metre 11011001101 0010111001001 0111111101 101111001 11101111 101111011 1110101101 101011111101 11111111100101 11011110101 1111101111111 1100101011001 10011
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 570
Words 114
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 13
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 114
Words per stanza (avg) 28

About this poem

The beautiful months of September and October leave us to quickly bringing in the cold gray winter here in Kentucky.

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Written on August 12, 2022

Submitted by eileenclark55 on September 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Eileen Clark

When I was little I was always rhyming things in my head as a child but never wrote things down. I have a slight learning disability, did poorly in school, and quit the day I turned sixteen. That should explain my poor spelling folks! For many years I kept busy as most do with taking care of home and family and friends and pets and working, and so on. I did keep up with my painting and they made nice gifts to give out to friends for every occasion. Now I'm old and crippled with rheumatoid arthritis and somewhat housebound, hence the Blogs and websites to keep myself busy and I began to write poems. My poems are not sophisticated or brilliant, just simple writings filled with memories of my childhood, my imagination, my experiences in life, and my plight with arthritis. I love my poems and don't mind saying so. I hope to post some of my short stories when I get brave enough. Eileen Clark more…

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