Analysis of Your voice is home

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)



"Am I clear now?" I asked my God
"Just a little bit more" he whispered
And all his love poured into my head
Past love then desires instead
But then I wondered from my bed
I searched for the light
And relieved my bladder to the night
I hoped I wouldn't get much badder
Then I found a hidden ladder and door
That led to you and so much more
For you were home and watching cartoons
Just like the old days when we used to
I asked " have you been in here before"
You said "yes" and " come and explore"


Scheme ABCCCDDEEEFGEE
Poetic Form
Metre 11111111 101011110 011110111 11101001 11110111 11101 001110101 11110111 1110101001 11110111 110101001 110111111 111110101 11101001
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 496
Words 104
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
Lines Amount 14
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 382
Words per stanza (avg) 103
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Written on September 15, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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