Analysis of Crucify me



Dear God you catch me on a lullaby
And it is as if I had died
On a cloud and
crucified

My God you feed me with masteries
And it is as if I lost my mind
On a dream and
Mistified

Lord God you love me in sweet glory
And it is as if I had sighed
And into the mist
my goodbyes

Sweet God you hold me in heavens harmony
And it is as if my thoughts are covered
In oyster shells
pearled


Scheme XABA CXBA DAXC DXCA
Poetic Form Quatrain  (75%)
Metre 111111010 01111111 1010 10 1111111 011111111 1010 1 111110110 01111111 00101 11 11111010100 0111111110 0101 1
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 380
Words 88
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 73
Words per stanza (avg) 21
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Written on September 12, 2022

Submitted by HeatherLydiaThornhill on September 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Heather Lydia Thornhill

Moods and mindsets poetry. Published. Book in progress: Don't talk rot. more…

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