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Archy save me.

Heather Lydia Thornhill 1981 (Manchester)

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There was just enough love left to love me
But my wounds had opened too far
There was just enough love left to love me
But my pity was was hung up on a star
There was just enough love left to love me
But the Arch Angels capacity was filled
There was just enough love left to love me
But I'd already taken the pills
There was just enough love left to love me
But I had to wait for a lift
There was just enough love left to love me
But heaven was creating new gifts
There was just enough love left to love me
But I sat watching earth as it stilled
There was just enough love left to love me
But I was scared for my baby until
There was just enough love left to love me

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Loves limits.

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Written on October 25, 2021

Submitted by heathert.34240 on October 25, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbAbAcAdAeAfAcAgA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 650
Words 141
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 17
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