Analysis of Tears of Sadness



Tears of Sadness

Rain pours down from Heaven above
GOD's tears of sadness,
shed out of love

Eat, become like god, the evil one hisst
the garden no more,  covered by mist.
Good and evil came out from darkness
the couple now saw true nakedness.

Rain pours down from Heaven above
GOD's tears of sadness, shed out of love.

Two brothers born into sin
the evil one’s reign begins.
Jealously by one to the other
by the hand with a rock, he killed his brother.
His blood cries out from the ground below
Now banished,
to the land of Nod,
the curse to follow.

Rain pours down from Heaven above
GOD's tears of sadness , shed out of love.

A woman's tears, for barren she be
by his seed, a son given to he.
Upon a pyre  a sacrifice unto thee.
His hand is stayed, by the lamb at the tree.
A great Nation will come from his seed,
Then will come The sacrifice , to set all free.

Rain pours down from Heaven above
GOD's tears of sadness, shed out of love

Forty days and forty nights
MY tears will cleans this world and make it right.
Build The Ark, preserve Creation,
from your seed, my promise to the father of a Nation.

Rain pours down from Heaven above
GOD's tears of sadness, shed out of love.

A babe in a basket, upon the Nile
This Prince of Egypt, will set Israel free.
Plagues will come, ten in all
the first born of Egypt, the Angel of Death will call.

Rain pours down from Heaven above
GOD's tears of sadness, shed out of love.

The Shepard boy, the giant he slayed
his songs of love and Praise upon his harp he played.
Murder and Adultery brought him to his knee
this King of Israel sinned against thee.

Rain pours down from Heaven above
GOD's tears of sadness, shed out of love.

A Child born of virgin birth
The Creator of all, walked upon this Earth.
Came to Redeem the lost setting all free
Gave HIS life upon that crude rugged tree.
Darkness came, lightning strikes, the Earth torn apart,
The Greatest Love, holds us all in HIS Heart.

Rain pours down from Heaven above
GOD's tears of sadness, shed out of love.

Sue-Ellen Newman
(Copyright@2013)
30/07/2013
Edited 23/8/22


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110 11111001 11110 1111 1011101011 010111011 101011110 0101111 11111001 111101111 1101011 0101101 100111010 10110111110 111110101 110 10111 01110 11111001 111101111 010111011 111011011 01010010101 1111101101 011011111 1110101111 11111001 111101111 1010101 1111110111 10101010 11111010101010 11111001 111101111 0100100101 11110111001 111101 0111100101111 11111001 111101111 010101011 111101011111 100010011111 1111001011 11111001 111101111 0111101 00101110111 1101011011 1110111101 10110101101 0101111011 11111001 111101111 11010 10 1 100
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,087
Words 436
Sentences 25
Stanzas 17
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 4, 2, 8, 2, 6, 2, 4, 2, 4, 2, 4, 2, 6, 2, 4
Lines Amount 58
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 94
Words per stanza (avg) 23

About this poem

This poem takes you through a stroll through the Bible this poem is a small picture from the big book And I edited it so it wasn’t so long

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Written on July 30, 2013

Submitted by Sueellen11 on August 28, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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