Analysis of Rebirth



Near the woods I sat
A clear sheet is all i had ,
I drew the bluest painting
With the grayest shade of mine
I double overed the sheet and
Kept it inside,
I rushed towards the busted gate
Where a poet stayed
Flaming tinder , and a hot coffee pot
And a wise man
Sipping on an espresso shot
On my tip-toes I lead my way to him
With a calm tone ; he spoke to me
" Have a seat young lady "
A red face and a soft smile as
I sat on of the couches on his side
" I know what brought you here the worldy life is what you fear "
" Forsooth ! Sire " , i replied
He opened a rusted trunk
And gave me a Book
At first ,
I felt misunderstood , later in the eve
I loosened it's tie
I turned the pages as I took a deep sigh!
I read one of the verses
Saying
" John 3:3 - Jesus answered and said to him most assuredly I say to you unless one is born again he cannot see the kingdom of God "
The Bible !
Is what I had
I stopped on a dime,
An epiphany grabbed , my heart
It felt like a rebirth
I took that sheet out of my pant,
I unfolded it
And suddenly it was filled with spectrum shade


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJIKLLMFNFOPQRSSTCUVBWXYZ1 H
Poetic Form Tetractys  (31%)
Metre 10111 0111111 1101010 1010111 1101010 1101 11010101 10101 1010001101 0011 1011101 1111111111 10111111 101110 01100111 1111010111 1111110111111 110101 1100101 01101 11 1100110001 11011 11010111011 1111010 10 1101001111010011110111101110101011 010 1111 11101 10100111 111001 11111111 10101 01001111101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,076
Words 245
Sentences 4
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 35
Lines Amount 35
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 804
Words per stanza (avg) 238

About this poem

Ok so I wrote a poem: where a girl (hypothetically me) who feels lonely about life so, she goes by her day to find a cottage of a wise man who hands over her a book She then opens it and reads few of it stanzas, and then she feels a rebirth as finds the words of an oracle

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Written on August 24, 2022

Submitted by khansania9917 on August 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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