Analysis of Poisonous substances



A tear drop,
Always comes flowing down
Through my cheeks
It saddens my heart,
And weakens my soul
When I remember how terrible,
Humans can be.

It pleases their minds
And strengthens their soul
At the sound of your downfall.

They seem like your friends,
But are serpents,
Nothing but poisonous substances,
Ready to kill you slowly
As if you were not their comrade.
Oh, how terrible
Humans can be.


Scheme xxxxabC xax xxxcxbC
Poetic Form
Metre 011 11101 111 11011 01011 110101100 1011 11011 01011 101111 11111 1110 101100100 1011110 1110111 11100 1011
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 402
Words 85
Sentences 4
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 3, 7
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 105
Words per stanza (avg) 23

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The poem focuses on the evil of man towards his own kind

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Submitted by salihujummai40 on August 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Saidu Rahama

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