Analysis of Pitiful me



Every morning I wake up
And see your face
Constantly reminded of my mistakes
I sometimes wish you weren't here
So I don't have to
Suffer the consequences

Living with you hasn't been easy
Working and schooling
Fending for you and me
Keeping you a secret from my parents
So I don't have to see the look of disappointment
On their faces

I was supposed to be pure
But I was blind
Blinded by my friends
And by material things
But as they say
Experience is the best teacher


Scheme XXXXXA BXBXXA XXXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10010111 0111 1000101101 10111101 11111 100100 101110110 10010 101101 1010101110 111111011010 1110 1101111 1111 10111 0101001 1111 010010110
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 474
Words 96
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6
Lines Amount 18
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 125
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

The poem is about a young single mother who made terrible choices in her mouth and is regretting it

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Written on August 15, 2022

Submitted by www.perfectasanuvwie on August 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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