Analysis of LUSTED



I will call it desperation
Yes, it was all desperation
to belong where I never belonged
with a he that is now a stranger.

I lusted over fake things
became an addict to pains n tears
after each holler and perfidy
ravaging my mind unawares.

Lust got me lost
took every ration of my gray matter
then grace came forth
affirm me just as I am.


Scheme AAXB XCXC XBXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (33%)
Metre 1111010 1111010 101111001 101111010 1101011 011011111 101100100 1001101 1111 11001011110 1111 0111111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 345
Words 76
Sentences 3
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 22
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 89
Words per stanza (avg) 22

About this poem

It's a short story about my younger self.

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Written on August 25, 2022

Submitted by orjis617 on August 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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