Analysis of Heavenly state of mind
Oh, I miss those days
When I sat peacefully on the top of mountains covered with haze,
Those carefree moments lagged behind
Leaving an irremovable scar deep in my mind.
Look how I was transformed!
From killing mosquitoes while my mother roasted maize,
I became part of this continuous rat race
From learning to conquer the terror of darks,
I learnt to regret on my marks.
How badly I want to shout, I failed,
I am from that soil where once intellectuals hailed!
To hide and distract me from the bitter truth,
I wanna find a sharp knife,
And slit down my cursed throat .
How the people would love to tell behind me,
About the forgotten girl who had a pretty hard life,
Got killed and burnt ,
Maybe it was just a 'mental suicide'.
Scheme | AABB XAXAX CCXDX XDXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 11111 1111001011101011 1110101 101111011 111101 1100101110101 101111010011 11011001011 11101111 110111111 111111101001 11001110101 1101011 011111 10101111011 01001011101011 1101 1011101010 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 732 |
Words | 151 |
Sentences | 6 |
Stanzas | 4 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 5, 5, 4 |
Lines Amount | 18 |
Letters per line (avg) | 32 |
Words per line (avg) | 8 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 144 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 34 |
About this poem
I wrote this poem to relax my mind from the examination stress I am facing as a student and all the external worries.
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Written on August 07, 2022
Submitted by Dweepeshlic on August 07, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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