Analysis of Discovering Love At A Signal

Louise M. Robello 1956 (San Pedro CA)



Through the be canyons I can hear the distant whispers of Innocent voices speaking softly with discontent like they were being punished for their sins.  I heard the cry of death a faint squeal of a puppy getting attacked and eaten by Coyotes.   I decided to go for a cruise it was at that red light I saw you operating through the force of gravity I am drawn to you.  Oblivious to my surroundings my focus is on you.  I see you it's like I'm in a trance My eyes are fixed on you and only you.  Nothing else matters nothing else is in my sight.  I'm so honored to be in your presence the desire for you is so strong I can't move I'm speechless talking only with my eyes.  Your beauty and your smile just melts my heart away.  I examine you from head to toe wishing with every living breathing part of me that I could lick you and taste a tapestry of love.  If I could make a wish on the next full moon it would be to hold you so close to my heart, your smell the softness of your skin touching every part of me bringing happiness to a whole new level.  Then the light turned green and you were gone.  As reality sets in and tears feel my eyes I will never give up hope, this moment of adoration will last an eternity.  I will see you in my dreams as the cosmic forces guide me to my soulmate.


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Finding your soul mate

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Written on August 19, 2022

Submitted by louiserobello56 on August 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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