Analysis of Depart
I’m afraid to loose you but I have to face it.
Get rid of you, so you cant spread and infect other places
and I loose them to and I’ve thought this through.
Like rain soaked shoes, my pillow case soaked through.
Not even voodoo can undo what will soon be my view.
My reflection with no boobs, self confidence issues.
What I really need right now is this in my rear view.
I don’t want to hold a grudge with god above cuz of you.
For this bullet I can’t dodge having my breasts cut off.
For this sadness in my heart because we have to depart.
For the vision without you I can’t unsee cause it’s true.
You’ve been invaded by cancer and you must be removed.
They say it’s for my health and when genetic tests are read.
They will have to take you both, any alternative’s dead.
Depression is alive and it’s invading my head.
So I’ll keep my negativity to myself instead.
Scheme | ABCCCDCCEFCGHHHH |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 101111111111 111111110011010 0111101111 1111110111 1101101111111 1010111110010 1110111110111 11111011101111 1110111101111 11100110111101 1010011111111 11010110011101 11111101010111 11111111001001 0101010101011 111101001101 |
Closest metre | Iambic heptameter |
Characters | 931 |
Words | 188 |
Sentences | 16 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 16 |
Lines Amount | 16 |
Letters per line (avg) | 42 |
Words per line (avg) | 10 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 668 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 167 |
About this poem
My feeling!
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Written on August 10, 2022
Submitted by annetteberberena on August 27, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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