Analysis of BATTLES

Suchitra pathak 2003 (Pokhara)



Look at you, battling with your life injured by its horns
You are like an anthophile eager to pick the roses, poor you hurted with it's thorns
You are that soldier in your battle, who can't afford losing but not at the cost of your people
Gosh your loyalty!! they are swaying up your life, letting your emotions shuffle
You are apt to let the sword past your heart
Cause smiling after being backstabbed is your art
Your blood dispersed through the battlefield is like a liquor to commemorate for your traitors
Still you are glad to see the happiness on the face of your betrayers
✍️ Suchitra Pathak


Scheme AABBCCDAE
Poetic Form
Metre 11110011110111 111111011010111111 111100110110110111011110 11100111011110101010 1111101111 11010101111 110110101101010101110 1111110100101111 101
Closest metre Iambic octameter
Characters 613
Words 113
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 9
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 12
Letters per stanza (avg) 480
Words per stanza (avg) 109

About this poem

This poem is about someone who does everything to make others happy yet she is backstabbed everytime by others still she is fine with how she is treated as she still care about them and their happiness ...she will keep being real and good with them as they matters for her ❤️

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Written on July 13, 2022

Submitted by Suchitrapathak7 on August 12, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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