Analysis of "Timeclock Love"

Irena Horodynska 1971 (Zlotoryja)



My Lord
If you only knew…

Each though, that comes to my mind,
Each morning breeze with your view,
Each ghost with your face at night,

Each footstep outside the door,
Each phone call, each door knock,
Each minute that passes with ought you,
Each second around the clock.,

Each weekend full of your thoughts,
Each hope to see you soon,
Each empty room with four walls,
Each sunshine, each nightly moon,

Each fun, each cry
Each whatever…
And time, which goes on forever
Reminding me of you,

My Lord,
If you only knew…


Scheme AB xbx xcbc xdxd xeeb AB
Poetic Form
Metre 11 11101 1111111 1101111 1111111 111101 111111 110110111 1100101 111111 111111 1101111 111101 1111 110 01111010 010111 11 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 525
Words 112
Sentences 2
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 4, 4, 4, 2
Lines Amount 19
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 67
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

There is a border line of feelings where the friendships turn into love.

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Written on January 01, 2009

Submitted by on August 21, 2022

Modified on March 28, 2023

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Irena Horodynska

I live so so life- no complains. more…

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