Analysis of FULLNESS A CANDLKE LIT UPON THE WORLD



I live under the glare of a star
detached from the short earthly path
attached to the love of true life
in the mystical bed of eternity.

The hours were of the time consumed,
lonely passage to worlds of vain chimeras,
path already traced to foreseen destination
where tonight's rumba ends.

From vain prosaic ties free, the soul
his infinite journey without hesitation undertakes
beyond so much pain and so much death,
only seeks strength in the quietness of Peace
to be his carrier pigeon of good will
that somewhere in the world God awaits

A most delightful journey
A song to You,
my nest to roost in ways I cannot reckon.
A song to let the pen dispense
 sweet strokes and lines
and rhythms for you to feel like incense
caressing the corners of your land.

To let it be a journey of life
 through the fertile valley
of your skin divine.
 To let it devour the geography
 of your thoughts of mine akin.

A poem to be for all a sacred temple,
an angel painted on its dome,
a place to call the world to sermon,
and yet, for me, alone to read.

For in verse, I would become,
by a muse so gently tamed,
 my most glorious tale,
for all who love, to hear and say.

******
A Candle Lit Upon The World Manhattan

New York 911 2001

¡Pass the torch...! the trembling hand
stretched, my candle lit another candle
and so a thousands more ignited
at our services today.
For this little flame upon the melting wax,
 a message sent across the pews to all in pray,
 in our humble church of Bethlehem.

And it felt so mystic and celestial
to pass the torch with love and faith,
 for in this land of ours,
 is the candle in our hand today,
 the glowing light for all who perished
 in the skies above and those in deepest caves entombed. Pass the torch my friend!
Pass it well
beyond the temple of your faith,
 for it is the candle lit upon the world today
the last farewell to those
who went to eternal rest
and us all who must begin to live again.

Just an instant

An instant was of light of summer dawn
 and blue of hope upon the sky...
 and then no more but doom and fury
of hell upon the land.
A cloud of death for us all
 to walk the path of no return.
The empire is grieving,
our souls in ashes drown,
friends, brothers, soul's unknown,
posthumous cry from far beyond
a plight of rescue call us all,
 to live again and roar with fury unleashed
 only God can hear
us in our pain from the horror of today.

On to war

Do not rejoice in battle,
the midst of fury unleashed,
Agfan in flames
or Taliban destroyed.
Marching on today we must
not to seek revenge,
or match the reign of horror
launched on fateful day,
but to find the way
to see the face of evil
in its cave of hell
and feel the grip of death
and rescue life itself.
For the time has come
to let the well
of our faith run beyond
the roots of Bin Laden.
To kill the beast, we must,
for in the killing
the sword of justice thrust,
an eternal dawn
will come of light
for Islam and for us all.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (21%)
Metre 111001101 01101101 01101111 00100110100 010010101 101011111 1010111010 10111 110101101 1100100101010 011110111 10110010011 11110010111 11001101 0101010 0111 11110111010 01110101 1101 0101111101 010010111 111101011 101010 11101 11101000100 1111101 010111101010 11010111 011101110 01110111 1011101 1011101 111001 11111101 1 01010101010 11 10101001 1110101010 010101010 11010001 11101010101 010101011101 010101110 0111100010 11011101 1011110 1010010101 010111110 001010101010110111 111 01010111 1110101010101 01111 1110101 01111011101 1110 1101111101 01110101 011111010 110101 0111111 11011101 0100110 1010101 110101 10011101 01110111 11010111001 10111 101011010101 111 1101010 0111001 101 11001 1010111 11101 1101110 11101 11101 1101110 01111 010111 010101 10111 1101 1101101 011110 110111 10010 011101 10101 1111 1010111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 3,016
Words 651
Sentences 22
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 6, 7, 5, 4, 4, 2, 1, 7, 12, 1, 14, 1, 23
Lines Amount 95
Letters per line (avg) 24
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 38

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Under God... in remembrance of a fateful day 911 2001

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Written on September 03, 2001

Submitted by aveviajera on September 07, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

3:16 min read
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Joseph Berolo

Joseph Berolo, Colombian born. swiss italian descendant. Poet and writer founder of Naciones Unidas de las Letras, United Nations of the Arts dedicated to promote world peace and harmony through the teaching of poetry and the Fine Arts in the heart and minds of young people,. more…

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