Analysis of Holding Burdens



If someone is caught in a sin,
And overtaken by a fault;
Letting the restoration begin,
Through a confession to be sought.

Watch out for a gentle spirit,
That you are not tempted as well;
Supporting with righteous merit,
So that the Law of Christ will dwell.

Carry burdens of another.
Something with nothing does deceive;
To examine each other,
For tribulations to relieve.

Let someone examine his deeds,
Of himself that he would take pride;
But by comparing his own needs,
To release the load deep inside.

Receive instructions in the Word,
Throughout the Scriptures what you sought;
Comprehending what you have heard,
Share all the good things it has taught.

Be not deceived others has sown,
Never mock God what you shall reap;
Through Christ is where the truth is known,
The Shepherd looks after His sheep.

Sowing your own reaps corruption,
His Spirit reaps eternal life;
He sows only after redemption,
Easing the burden of the strife.

Grow not weary in doing good,
In due time we righteously reap;
Perseverance doing as we should,
That the Lord ensures our keep.

So whenever we have a chance,
Let us do good to each other;
For believers as to advance,
To any sister or brother.

Copyright ©2022 Richard Newton Sherrer


Scheme AXAB CDCD EFEF GHGH IBIB JKJK LMLM NKNK OEOE E
Poetic Form
Metre 1111001 0100101 10001001 10010111 11101010 11111011 01011010 11011111 10101010 10110101 1010110 1010101 1101011 10111111 11010111 10101101 01010001 01010111 0101111 11011111 11011011 10111111 11110111 01011011 10111010 11010101 111010010 10010101 11100101 01111001 01010111 10101101 10101101 11111110 10101101 11010110 10101010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,229
Words 256
Sentences 11
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 37
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 97
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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Support One Another Galatians 6:1-10

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Written on September 07, 2022

Submitted by sir_ricky on September 06, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Richard Newton Sherrer

I was born and raised on a farm in Pennsylvania. It was a small family farm that was handed down through 8 generations of Sherrer men until my father; Newton just could not make a living from it any longer. He thought that I would make a better living away from the farm. So, I decided to join the Air Force in 1969 upon graduating from high school. I gained quite a bit of experience and insight on life while in the service. Even though I was only stationed on the east coast of the US, my Air Force career took me to Germany and Korea. After 20 years wearing of the blue uniform, I decided going in a different direction and found myself becoming very diverse in many different fields. Something still seemed missing to me after being separated from the service for about 10 years. The Air Force was a way of life for me, but really missed life in Korea. I found myself changing careers again. Poetry was an interest of his since my days in high school. With returning to the Lord, I felt motivated to write of my Christian beliefs. I started looking at Bible verses and reflecting on my own personal experiences. The Bible was found to be as true today as to when the various books were written. I could see much of what the Bible is teaching us as valid as every in modern time. It felt only natural to me on using his personal experience based on Bible verses and see much of my own life written in the Scriptures. God inspires me what to write about though. I do not claim to be an expert on God or the Bible. I am just a Christian who has become enlightened to write poetic verses from the Holy Scriptures. more…

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