Analysis of Dealing With Pain



To see you in pain
Is worse than a dagger
To see you in pain
Leaves my heart jagger
To see you in pain
Is an emotional ladder

To understand the pain
Gets me closer
To understand the pain
Makes me feel better
To understand the pain
Makes my heart lighter

To help with the pain
Makes me want to boast
To help with the pain
Makes me feel like the most
To help with the pain
Is better than being on the coast

I wanna be there
For the good and the bad
Trust me you won’t scare
I want to be your comrade


Scheme AbAbAb AbAbAb AcAcAc dede
Poetic Form
Metre 11101 111010 11101 11110 11101 11010010 10101 1110 10101 11110 10101 11110 11101 11111 11101 111101 11101 110110101 11011 101001 11111 111111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 507
Words 113
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 4
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 98
Words per stanza (avg) 26

About this poem

As I attempt to try and help others in mental health issues, I see a fear in how they may share. But for people to understand that letting others in will help both people, and unlimited growth is available.

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Written on September 04, 2020

Submitted by Coltan_grabau1 on August 24, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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