Analysis of "Lucky one"

Lenamarie Clark 1981 (Indianapolis,Indiana)



Oh  lucky one that I have grown to know
over years,my love for you is sheer and it don't smear.

Your the lucky one who won my heart
now don't that sound fun?

My mind has many memories it's what my heart pumps,i have a lump in my throat  somedays.
I'm trying to stay on task however I'm not fast.
Love is hard somedays it has unusual ways but I will be okay.

Lucky one I love  your heart I hope we don't part.

Hush,hush my sweetheart I will hold you tight
I will make our love worth a fight.

I love that smile i have it on file,
and I begin to smile,you make my days stay and don't ever go away.

some can't compare our take my heart, as I'm unique it's something their trying to seek, they can't keep up cause their weak.

I won't fester or make this a competition,
you my friend has found the lucky one.

I'm not  a normal  sister or a pal
and don't say holy  cow.

Lucky one, see im special in God's ways,
he sees my care my love is in the air always with every beat. I'm strong and steady to my feet, shy I maybe at first until I find my comfort zone,ya know you've seened.

I'm trying i really am,read my poems then you will know some of my clues,a map of me laid gently from my soul are my words, over a thousand of verses,even my songs are made into courses, i take love over  forest tops,beyond  the moon and back those are facts.

Lucky one you are the holy number that I see i like that you comfort me i need to feel  freed ya see,thank you for rescuing me...


Scheme XX AB CXD A EE XD X BB XX CA C X
Poetic Form
Metre 1101111111 101111110111 101011111 11111 11110100111111010111 110111110111 111111010111111 101111111111 11111111 111101101 111111111 01011111110110101 1101101111101110110111111111 11101110010 111110101 1101010101 011101 1011110011 11111110011110011101011111101101111101111 110110111011111111111110111111100101111110110111101010101111 101110101011111111011111111111001
Characters 1,477
Words 335
Sentences 15
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 3, 1, 2, 2, 1, 2, 2, 2, 1, 1
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 53
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 92
Words per stanza (avg) 25

About this poem

I wrote for my long term boyfriend of 15 years Charles Oberman.

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Written on August 22, 2022

Submitted by PoetFeather on August 23, 2022

Modified on March 26, 2023

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Lenamarie Clark

My name Is Lenamarie Clark, From Arizona. I been writing poetry since age 11,I have well over 150 poems, i write just about daily. Poetry is my story, keeps me going in life! I dont know where I would be if poetry didn't exist. I believe that some where someone needs someone's inspiration... -Lenamarie Clark- more…

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