Analysis of The Dissapointed Tool



When you had no one
I was there for you
Across time zones
Sacrificing my sleep

Now I have no one
You’re all I have
You’re all I had
You found others
And so you left

What did I do
To deserve a fate like this
All I gave you was words of kindness
Yet you call me the problem

I don’t regret it
Im happy that I was able to help you
Im just disappointed
the moment you found others
you left me to die
as if I didn’t exist
as if I was nothing
but a tool


Scheme ABXX AXXCX BXXX XBXCXXXX
Poetic Form
Metre 11111 11111 0111 10011 11111 1111 1111 1110 0111 1111 1010111 111111110 1111010 11011 11011110111 11010 0101110 11111 111101 111110 101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 458
Words 103
Sentences 1
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 5, 4, 8
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 16
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 86
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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Written on August 22, 2022

Submitted by orangedonut on August 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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