Analysis of Stop the Gloom of Blood



Why should we kill our brothers
in the name of war?
We even don't know that it leads to the god's Bar.
War is not a one-time event
It leads to another war
War is a Gloom of Blood
War makes the relatives shed a  flood of Tears
War chases the emotion cheers.
And A Country Always Loses A Citizen
A Citizen does sin for his Country by killing a Non-Citizen.
War never brings Peace and brings more gloom.
A war never allows flowers to bloom.
War is always a loom.
War is a doom.
The word war itself a boom.
A War never brings light.
War always brings Mother Earth's Tear in Flight.
If there is no war, then there is no bloodshed.
If there is no war, then there is no tear's flood.
If there is no war, then there is no life fed.
If there is no war, in that case, no one needs to stay in a hospital bed.
"I should not hurt anyone before my sleep."
 "I should not hurt anyone before my sleep."
These are the magical words
that can end the events of swords.
It may be heaven's chords.
If these words didn't work
then it can be solved by conversation
And always be a perk
which can chase the war the Dark.
Drive out the Gloom of Blood
and Bring the Bloom of Happiness flood
And never smirk
And never lurk
in the shadow of violence.
We can drive out the Gloom of Blood
with not hurting their Heart
And always keep in mind that
"I should not hurt anyone before my sleep."
 "I should not hurt anyone before my sleep."
If we follow this, In their case, no need to kill our brothers in the name of war.
We can Drive out the gloom of blood
And bring the Bloom of happiness flood
With the help of our minds.
We can drive out the violence's Blinds.
We can live in Peace with Non-Violence.
We can stop the war
And the Peace will not be far.
We can become the purple host without war.
We can avoid the gloom of blood
And bring the blooming flowers.


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Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,833
Words 397
Sentences 30
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 51
Lines Amount 51
Letters per line (avg) 28
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 1,408
Words per stanza (avg) 365

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war always gives immense of melancholy.

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Submitted by on August 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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