Analysis of Ode to Walt Whitman

Federico García Lorca 1898 (Fuente Vaqueros) – 1936 (Alfacar)



By the East River and the Bronx
boys were singing, exposing their waists
with the wheel, with oil, leather, and the hammer.
Ninety thousand miners taking silver from the rocks
and children drawing stairs and perspectives.

But none of them could sleep,
none of them wanted to be the river,
none of them loved the huge leaves
or the shoreline's blue tongue.

By the East River and the Queensboro
boys were battling with industry
and the Jews sold to the river faun
the rose of circumcision,
and over bridges and rooftops, the mouth of the sky emptied
herds of bison driven by the wind.

But none of them paused,
none of them wanted to be a cloud,
none of them looked for ferns
or the yellow wheel of a tambourine.

As soon as the moon rises
the pulleys will spin to alter the sky;
a border of needles will besiege memory
and the coffins will bear away those who don't work.

New York, mire,
New York, mire and death.
What angel is hidden in your cheek?
Whose perfect voice will sing the truths of wheat?
Who, the terrible dream of your stained anemones?

Not for a moment, Walt Whitman, lovely old man,
have I failed to see your beard full of butterflies,
nor your corduroy shoulders frayed by the moon,
nor your thighs pure as Apollo's,
nor your voice like a column of ash,
old man, beautiful as the mist,
you moaned like a bird
with its sex pierced by a needle.
Enemy of the satyr,
enemy of the vine,
and lover of bodies beneath rough cloth...

Not for a moment, virile beauty,
who among mountains of coal, billboards, and railroads,
dreamed of becoming a river and sleeping like a river
with that comrade who would place in your breast
the small ache of an ignorant leopard.

Not for a moment, Adam of blood, Macho,
man alone at sea, Walt Whitman, lovely old man,
because on penthouse roofs,
gathered at bars,
emerging in bunches from the sewers,
trembling between the legs of chauffeurs,
or spinning on dance floors wet with absinthe,
the faggots, Walt Whitman, point you out.

He's one, too! That's right! And they land
on your luminous chaste beard,
blonds from the north, blacks from the sands,
crowds of howls and gestures,
like cats or like snakes,
the faggots, Walt Whitman, the faggots,
clouded with tears, flesh for the whip,
the boot, or the teeth of the lion tamers.

He's one, too! That's right! Stained fingers
point to the shore of your dream
when a friend eats your apple
with a slight taste of gasoline
and the sun sings in the navels
of boys who play under bridges.

But you didn't look for scratched eyes,
nor the darkest swamp where someone submerges children,
nor frozen saliva,
nor the curves slit open like a toad's belly
that the faggots wear in cars and on terraces
while the moon lashes them on the street corners of terror.

You looked for a naked body like a river.
Bull and dream who would join wheel with seaweed,
father of your agony, camellia of your death,
who would groan in the blaze of your hidden equator.

Because it's all right if a man doesn't look for his delight
in tomorrow morning's jungle of blood.
The sky has shores where life is avoided
and there are bodies that shouldn't repeat themselves in the dawn.

Agony, agony, dream, ferment, and dream.
This is the world, my friend, agony, agony.
Bodies decompose beneath the city clocks,
war passes by in tears, followed by a million gray rats,
the rich give their mistresses
small illuminated dying things,
and life is neither noble, nor good, nor sacred.

Man is able, if he wishes, to guide his desire
through a vein of coral or a heavenly naked body.
Tomorrow, loves will become stones, and Time
a breeze that drowses in the branches.

That's why I don't raise my voice, old Walt Whitman,
against the little boy who writes
the name of a girl on his pillow,
nor against the boy who dresses as a bride
in the darkness of the wardrobe,
nor against the solitary men in casinos
who drink prostitution's water with revulsion,
nor against the men with that green look in their eyes
who love other men and burn their lips in silence.

But yes against you, urban faggots,
tumescent flesh and unclean thoughts.
Mothers of mud. Harpies. Sleepless enemies
of the love that bestows crowns of joy.

Always against you, who give boys
drops of foul death with bitter poison.
Always against you,
Fairies of North America,
Pájaros of Havana,
Jotos of Mexico,
Sarasas of Cádiz,


Scheme AXBCX XBXX BDEEFX XXXE GXDX XHXXA EIEJXXKLBEX DXBXK MEXXNNXX XXXNXAXA NOLEAG IEPDGB BFHB XQQE ODCXGXQ BDXG EXMXXJEIX AXXX XEXPEMB
Poetic Form
Metre 10110001 101001011 10111100010 1010101010101 0101010010 111111 1111011010 1111011 10111 10110001 101001100 001110101 011010 01010010110110 111010101 11111 111101101 111111 101011001 1110110 0101111001 010110101100 001011011111 111 11101 110110011 1011110111 1010011111 110101101011 11111111110 1110101101 11111010 111101011 11100101 11101 11111010 100101 100101 0101100111 110101010 1011011101 110100100101010 111111011 0111110010 11010101110 101111101011 01111 1011 0100101010 1000101101 1101111110 01110111 11111011 1110011 11011101 111010 11111 0111001 10111101 0110110101 11111110 1101111 1011110 1011110 0011001 11111010 11101111 1010111110 110010 10111010110 10110101100 10110110110110 111010101010 101111111 10111001111 1110011110010 011111011011101 001101011 0111111010 011101100101001 10010010101 110111100100 1001010101 11010110101011 0111100 10100101 011101011110 11101110111010 101110101001010 011101101 01110010 11111111110 01010111 011011110 10101110101 0010101 101010010010 111101010 101011111011 111010111010 11011101 01010011 1011110100 101101111 1011111 111111010 1011 10110100 1101010 1110 11111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 4,234
Words 781
Sentences 37
Stanzas 19
Stanza Lengths 5, 4, 6, 4, 4, 5, 11, 5, 8, 8, 6, 6, 4, 4, 7, 4, 9, 4, 7
Lines Amount 111
Letters per line (avg) 31
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 180
Words per stanza (avg) 41
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Federico García Lorca

Federico del Sagrado Corazón de Jesús García Lorca was a Spanish poet, dramatist and theatre director. García Lorca achieved international recognition as an emblematic member of the Generation of '27. He was executed by Nationalist forces during the Spanish Civil War. In 2008, a Spanish judge opened an investigation into Lorca's death. The García Lorca family eventually dropped objections to the excavation of a potential gravesite near Alfacar. However, no human remains were found. more…

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