Analysis of National hornbills

Sam madeyin 1991 (Ogun States)



Nasty are they all by nature
That's their villaneous race!
Wildy as unshaven and unkempt be
Their hearts know evils, to continuous pace, anvil of gods are the hornbills

Their Red and stronghead ties like late 'Tu-pack' bandanas
Why are we so tied to our Jihadist rules as monkey know the voice of bananas

They fought, and kill for living
Why are we sinning against the Creator
"Thou shalt not murder" we supposed to abide
Not our charged but God's own
You kidnapped the father, and left daughter at home crying
They invaded God nation's yet we call it a righteousness.

Why our brethren turned out enemies at sudden unknown late nights
Upon the nation's I swear I'm a mess
And I repented that I was born here
Into this pain, worries and duress
Thus is strange an evil in God's sight

Heart dipped in hot iron
Can't effect a good change both worsening the matter and causing shame
As tongue cannot be neither as these ones be tamed
a nation lamed!


Scheme AXXX BB CADXCX XEXEX XXXD
Poetic Form
Metre 10111110 1111 110100011 111101010011011101 11011111110 11111110111101011010 1101110 11110010010 11110101101 1101111 1101001101110 101011011110100 11010111001100111 0101011101 0101011111 011110010 111110011 110110 10101111000100101 111011011111 0101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 948
Words 178
Sentences 3
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 2, 6, 5, 4
Lines Amount 21
Letters per line (avg) 36
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 151
Words per stanza (avg) 34

About this poem

The poet sermonizing the mood about wicked and tuggery on the spree daily and refused to change thereby causing trouble in the neighborhood.

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Written on August 15, 2022

Submitted by LiteralErudite on August 15, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Sam madeyin

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