Analysis of Unforgettable day
Abdulhamid Bala Hassan 2002 (Gombe)
It's a day
Which could always be remembered
Due to the tragedy that happened
And it touch me to the extend, like no other day alike
The day overcome to little me
When it found me sleeping taking some rest
Without knowing that something terrible tort had happened
It's a a fizzle that end a friendship in our worldly life
A murmured taught had whispered in my ears
I wake up thinking like it be apparently
Before I opened my eyes well decently
A wrong thing had discovered
It's a heart break
Seeing my brother was just crying with tear
I'm afraid more than how expected
He taught to me
He said
Our lovely friend had kicked the bucket
I ask slowly
Who
He said Ali
Alas!!! I fall down on the bed
Nothing is rolling in my eyes
But just seeing the whole universe is rotating
My eyes filled up with tear, unstoppable
Thank God I have been caught up by my roommate
I feel lonely
Thinking about past events
Just seeing him in my eyes
I pray that paradise will be a restful to him
I pray that may he meet with his beloved once { ahlul-bayt } at the junction of getting into the paradise
I pray that there should be more snug than here
I pray that may you rest in peace
Ali haidar sulaiman
abdul-hammed bala hassan
Scheme | XABX CXBX XCCA XXXC DXCXC DEXX XCXE XXXX F F |
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Poetic Form | Tetractys (34%) |
Metre | 101 1111010 110100110 011110011110101 01101101 1111101011 01101101001110 1001011010010101 0101110011 111101110100 01110111100 0111010 1011 10110111011 101111010 1111 11 1010111010 1110 1 1110 01111101 10110011 11100110110 1111110100 1111111111 1110 1001101 1101011 111101101011 1111111101111101011001010 1111111111 11111101 1011 0111001 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,258 |
Words | 266 |
Sentences | 2 |
Stanzas | 10 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4, 1, 1 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 7 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 96 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 24 |
About this poem
Is poem I wrote about the incident that happened to me with my friend
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Submitted by abdulhamidbalahassan06 on July 21, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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