Analysis of The River-Merchant's Wife: A Letter

Ezra Pound 1885 (Hailey) – 1972 (Venice)



After Li Po

While my hair was still cut straight
     across my forehead
I played at the front gate, pulling
     flowers.
You came by on bamboo stilts, playing
     horse,
You walked about my seat, playing with
     blue plums.  
And we went on living in the village of
     Chokan:
Two small people, without dislike or
     suspicion.  

At fourteen I married My Lord you.
I never laughed, being bashful.
Lowering my head, I looked at the wall.
Called to, a thousand times, I never
     looked back.

At fifteen I stopped scowling,
I desired my dust to be mingled with
     yours
Forever and forever and forever.
Why should I climb the lookout?

At sixteen you departed,
You went into far Ku-to-en, by the river
     of swirling eddies,
And you have been gone five months.
The monkeys make sorrowful noise
     overhead.

You dragged your feet when you went
     out,
By the gate now, the moss is grown,
     the different mosses,
Too deep to clear them away!
The leaves fall early this autumn, in
     wind.
The paired butterflies are already
     yellow with August
Over the grass in the West garden;
They hurt me.  I grow older.
If you are coming down through the
     narrows of the river Kiang,
Please let me know beforehand,
And I will come out to meet you
          As far as Cho-fu-sa.

Translated by Ezra Pound


Scheme X XABXBXCXXDXD EXXFX BCXFG XFXXXA XGDXXDXXXDFXBXEX X
Poetic Form
Metre 1011 1111111 01110 11101110 10 111101110 1 110111101 11 01111000101 1 111001011 010 111110111 11011010 1001111101 110101110 11 1011110 10101111101 1 01000100010 111101 1011010 110111111010 11010 0111111 01011001 101 1111111 1 10110111 010010 1111101 011101100 1 01101010 10110 100100110 1111110 11110110 1010101 111101 01111111 111111 0101101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,309
Words 228
Sentences 18
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 1, 12, 5, 5, 6, 16, 1
Lines Amount 46
Letters per line (avg) 21
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 137
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Submitted on May 13, 2011

Modified on April 26, 2023

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Ezra Pound

Ezra Weston Loomis Pound was an American expatriate poet and critic of the early modernist movement. more…

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