Analysis of Tick Tock

LISA A BORKA 1969 (Arizona)



I'm a clock with no face,
Hands moving with time.
The pressure is rising
With each hourly chime.

A clock with no eyes
To see what lies ahead.
No way to ensure safety,
No end to my dread

A clock with no feelings
No heartbeat, no breath.
A clock with no conscience,
No fear of death.

What would happen
To the clock with no face
If the batteries died ?
Would they just be replaced ?

Time can be changed
Forward and back.
But not with this clock,
That something it lacks.

Time will go on
With each tickety-tock,
And the clock with no face
is still just a clock.


Scheme ABXB XCXC XDXD XAXX XXEX XEAE
Poetic Form Quatrain  (67%)
Metre 101111 11011 010110 11101 01111 111101 1110110 11111 011110 1111 011110 1111 1110 101111 101001 11111 1111 1001 11111 11011 1111 1111 001111 11101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 569
Words 129
Sentences 10
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 18
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 72
Words per stanza (avg) 18

About this poem

I wrote this when I was going through a time when I felt empty and it seemed it would never end

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Written on July 30, 2022

Submitted by lissanneb on July 30, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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