Analysis of Miyo



I know that he'll never say
"I love you"
I know that no matter how many hellos or night night he sends
The message i crave for will always remain unsend
He's sweet, he's kind
He's everything that's always on my mind
I hold him
He grips tighter
I kiss him
He gives in deeper
I call him
He sounds sweeter
I love him
He turns bitter
He smiles and looks away
He holds and unfolds in a different way
He catches my breath and steals away the wind
He drives me crazy by being the most adorable thing
His smile Oh Heaven
Bless me i say
Could lit up an unlit sky
Yet he calls me his sunshine everyday
He treats me like i should be
But he won't do it out of love he says
To oblige me and to be with me
Is all he says
He wants and wants
Not love
He fades
And i stay silent
Looking at him with nothing but love
Not wanting to lose another one
So i seal my lips
And kill my heart
He takes me on trips
A new chapter that ends at the start....


Scheme ABCDDDEFEFEFEFAADGHAIAJKJKLMNDMHODOD
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101 111 111110110111111 01011111011 1111 11011111 111 1110 111 11010 111 1110 111 1110 110101 11001001001 11011010101 111101100101001 11110 1111 111111 111111101 1111111 1111111111 101101111 1111 1101 11 11 01110 101111011 110110101 11111 0111 11111 011011101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 932
Words 200
Sentences 1
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 36
Lines Amount 36
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 720
Words per stanza (avg) 196

About this poem

This is a poem about a boy who is aloof and all alone but has an alluring personality and the narrator is in love with him and cares for him a lot but he's not the type who falls in love and hence our narrator is yet again heartbroken.

Font size:
 

Written on July 02, 2004

Submitted by aria.hope2004 on July 25, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:02 min read
0

Hope Gamurs

She is a teenager who dares to dream High in this world of possibilities and grey areas and wants to express herself in the words that could become someone's inspiration and comfort. more…

All Hope Gamurs poems | Hope Gamurs Books

1 fan

Discuss this Hope Gamurs poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "Miyo" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 29 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/133573/miyo>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    1
    day
    3
    hours
    2
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    Who wrote the poem "The Road Not Taken"?
    A Langston Hughes
    B Robert Frost
    C Walt Whitman
    D Emily Dickinson