Analysis of Intermission
Life has never been a finished product
Nothing to revise, nothing to rectify
To feel its sweet palpability, enjoy it
To our fullest contention.
Like an age old tree adhering to
Seasonal changes of Nature as
Preprogrammed & preassigned its
Way is not; never also it goes
Playing hide & seek game of the
Gigantic sea, threatening now with
Tall, dark waves midway only
To calm down like a tamed pet
At the serpentine shore no matter
How furious, how draconic looking.
Honestly it is what we dream for
And working out the sum how tricky.
It does teach how to tear down
The strings of cobweb an innocent
Fly has been a prey to, for no fault.
It is rather flexible enough to change
The track how remote & how invisible
To release us from hard shackles of
Grief stricken poverty crippling
The soul. Who knows when & where
It be a good buddy copious enough,
Getting us the taste of nectar against
The double whammy piercing time
Ever awarding only devastation
And bubbles of fermentation.
Sparse motivation & Himalayan
Confidence to tide over the centripetal
Remorse, engulfing our deep slumbered
Willpower, surely can make us a
Visionary hermit carving out the
Depleted bout long cherished for.
And that golden moment is the
Intermission, telling the story is
Half-embraced & half told !!!
Scheme | AXXBXXXXCXDXXE FDXXXXXXEXXXXBBBDACCF CXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 1110101010 1010110110 11111011 11010010 111110101 100101101 111 111101011 1011110 010110011 111110 1111011 10101110 11001110 100111111 010101110 1111111 01111100 111011111 11101000111 0110110100 101111101 110100100 011111 11011010001 1010111001 01010101 1001010010 0101010 1010010 100111001 010101011 10101110 100101010 01011101 01101010 010100101 10111 |
Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 1,331 |
Words | 239 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 14, 21, 3 |
Lines Amount | 38 |
Letters per line (avg) | 27 |
Words per line (avg) | 6 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 344 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 75 |
About this poem
Life is made of both cries & smiles, only patience is required to enjoy it when it is your turn. Getting faded away with burden of pains & problems is not heroic. If today you are troubled, tomorrow may be yours day with lot of flowers blossoming in your garden. So wait & see what happens after intermission.
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Written on July 22, 2022
Submitted by dpdasbabu on July 22, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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