Analysis of Bitter but true

Sughra Ansari 2004 (Kanpur)



Why consider them devoid of any feelings,
Why needed releasing anyone from the prision
Deep words but why never hurts,
If you really understand then, never invert.

Why so dominant, do they really care
Why sitting in shade today, do it really repair
Chain of thoughts but why meaningless,
Why looking so broken, is there any fear.

Why to ruin our livers, was never yours,
Why to stare towars that never end wars,
Just fill up your cracks to look ahead,
Why to remind your heart, what it had already read.

Over and over, why being so dark
Why to shut up yourself, when they bark,
Is it really tough to win someone,
Do realise your presence mistakes should have a mark.


Scheme XAXX BBXX XXCC DDAD
Poetic Form
Metre 101010111010 11001010101 1111101 11100111001 1110011101 1100101111001 11111100 11011011101 111010101101 111111011 111111101 1101111110101 1001011011 111101111 11101111 11110011101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 685
Words 140
Sentences 5
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 33
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 131
Words per stanza (avg) 31

About this poem

This poem is about the ups and downs of the life, it is all about your useless struggle for difficult things.. This poem says that what is your will be your not today but definitely someday but what is not your will never be your, instead of hard struggle.. So look ahead for something that you think is yours not of someone else...

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Submitted by ansarisughra on July 24, 2022

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Sughra Ansari

I am 18 years old and i am in class 11th , I love to compose poems on the reality of life, i always convert my life real life incidences into beautiful poems, and this poem is one of them, i am also a urdu shayar and I really love urdu... I understand my real life incidence... That is all about me... And my dream is to become a doctor for my country and i want to serve my country.. Thats it . more…

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