Analysis of A Moment Of Truth

Dorothy Jane Crowe 1976 (Clark AFB)



I went with you for a real good reason
You were sweet and kind and never teasin
I should have never left you
That I know was really wrong
I sat myself down to write a song
About a wonderful guy who never lied
But at the end he laid down and died
But who really cares about a stupid song
At this point I really don't care if I wrote it wrong
There is one thing that I will say
Now that we are both apart
I know that means a broken heart
And all that times I really tried
To get back to you
So that I wouldn't feel so down and blue
My head goes spinning round and round
Sooner or later I will fall to the ground
I can't stop thinking of you
Because I am always feeling blue
Now I get so depressed
Because you were not like all the rest
If we were still together
I know in my heart that It would have been forever
But since I know that it cannot be
The two of us, you and me
Because you are six feet under
I will always Love You.
Even though We are not together
In my heart we are forever.


Scheme AABCCDDCCEFFDBBGGBBHHIIJJIBII
Poetic Form
Metre 1111101110 101010101 1111011 1111101 11111101 01010011101 110111101 11101010101 1111101111111 11111111 1111101 11110101 01111101 11111 1111011101 11110101 10110111101 1111011 01111101 111101 011011101 1101010 1101111111010 111111101 0111101 01111110 11111 101111010 01111010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 986
Words 211
Sentences 2
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 29
Lines Amount 29
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 771
Words per stanza (avg) 210

About this poem

Written in 1992. My last name was Crowe before I got married.

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Written on February 16, 1992

Submitted by DorothyJGarcia on July 27, 2022

Modified on April 02, 2023

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Dorothy Jane Crowe

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