Analysis of Altar



...better to see it wilt in autumn tints...
like a crown and with it their heavy thorns,
stemming from a blind stream of pure ascent:

burning in flames crackles all of it torn,
pitch black towers of smoke on a mount steep,
seen in a sky tender light has been born;

and like a hot wave, shape of a coil deep,
as locks found on a man turned a goat,
or at times ringlets that dangle sheep

near ponds where the needed grapevines pruned float,
with all modes of spices drifting they seep:
grown leaf of grapes girded round like a moat.


Scheme XXX ABA BCB CBC
Poetic Form
Metre 1011110101 1010111101 1010111101 1001101111 1110111011 1001101111 0101111011 111101101 11111101 111010111 1111101011 111111101
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 538
Words 119
Sentences 3
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 12
Letters per line (avg) 34
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 26
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Written on July 30, 2022

Submitted by robertrad2021 on July 30, 2022

Modified by robertrad2021 on July 31, 2022

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