Analysis of BUTTER? CAMELS?!



Untimely visit
easier to marble
remains of
desired keep-away

comfortable story
received...prove
yoked humour

to prevent
poetry's blush
to roll apple
once more
dragged in glass

held help
involved involving
chances tone

surrounding
surrender
change to plate
'what am you..'

Need
dust a tree

Need, dust a tree

Need dust, a tree

Need, dust, a tree

floating
pardoning
awful degree   awful extent
lawful degree   lawful extent

to bear ringed
hinged   thoughts
to applaud

entire prose
                to eat
not
    to live
prose
      to eat
             entire prose...

prose to eat
turn by turn
lovely pause, a pose

suppose
a repose expose impose
rim pose dim pose dispose
sim-pose sim-p-lose

hose was without... you tell

depose
prose
to eat note to live
not to leave
leave to leave
note to leave

till
tile rapid-tile rapid-trail tiles
reptile to slow repeat
pat pats tiles
sides
doubt to doubt doubt rare rarely
early to rare rare rarely

to rare rare
in-pair
empire
expire

for to tip is to tip
just a tip
just a lip
note, none
another than tip
speaking
its tips out till tip-lip
tip -deep
deep-tip
lip-tip
having
having
sighing
sigh
sigh-in
sign

mourning-mourn
the reality

or good morning
 mourning or morning
mourning and morning
mourning but morning but morning
wronging one another

in front of them

in font of them

side of them...sign of them
sag of them
include of
them
morning or mourning
wronging
virtue of us
virtue of them
vice of us
service of them
ought nought
greeting greeting
fought f-nought
bought b-nought
c-ought c-nought

Faultless breast
not pat-turned
faultless governs breasts

faultless
fault
faultless
faultless
pat
pat
pat-ful
pats
patterning
pat-turn
pat-full
'I hate war

You -pat founder
-keep war'

feeling
pat-inferior
pat-superior
pat-ful complex

emitting suicide
lying lie
light mild
hotmailed
mirage
mirroring
wedding-parting
ring-marriages
to appease
the chirping
birds
for denying
their left

to sing
their right- out,
early evening
as early morning

why not I start, grab
borrowing
the string
of my 'guitar'

to dance
along the 'silencing' 'lull' or lull

'let's stop
mimicking
king

still it does not ring
our hands
first
th-o-nd
fifth
fourth
rhythmic notes

for we're asleep
when we
chirped

our very last
song
song dip
song tip
song tip
song deep
song song
song song
deep song
tip-pit
tip song
pit song
dip-pit
pit- dip
dip song
deep dip
dip deep

one on top of another
whose
tip was this pit

whose?
whose pit was this tip

whose lip
was this keep-deep

To disavow
to disallow

every first serd
fifth fourth
stanza
stitching
edges
of
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
birds
birds-sakes

cut the whole cat

whose tipa..
losta
and founda
lipa

I'mnot your kee
PA
A
A
A
A
way called
good manner
good manor
matching
marking
'discount marching'

Witness,
as usual
ICE, this time - pure ice
sharpening
its edge

'May, my- enemy
building
you
out bouncing outdoor seat

cunningly
meaninglyessly
coffeeing
coffee
coffin

Intelligent flow
flow you farthest flow
lying errand

Scientist enough flow
flow you farthest flow
lying
errand

political enough
instinct-ly brief
worries trough the last laugh

A young dog
have had a chain
for a dinner
lunch time
breakfasteven

An old dog
have have a chain
for a breakfast
dinnertime
lunchbreakeven

A child dog
have have a chain
for a lunch
breakfast time
dinnerbreakeven

A young cat
have have
a chain
for a dinner

An old cat
have have have
a chain
for a lunch

A child cat
have envy
of a chain
or many
for a breakfast

A venture spring

Inspiration for this poem

I am Yukunno Ghirmay.
While walking around the canals ( of wharf/ of selearf/ of tearf) years before, around early evening-
I noticed that someone was crying his throat out for help- drowned or drowning.
Being new to the area, to the note, to the not, to the swimming thing, I was unable to watch what was happening....letalone to give hand.

Right then, I prayed someone to give hand and runaway from the episode for I couldn't believe I am unhelpful as the drowned person for another human variety and/or myself.


Scheme Text too long
Poetic Form
Metre 01010 100110 011 010101 100010 1 11 101 11 1110 11 101 11 01010 101 010 010 111 111 1 101 1101 1101 1101 10 100 10011001 10011001 111 11 101 0101 11 1 11 1 11 0101 111 111 10101 01 0010101 111101 11111 110111 01 1 11111 111 111 111 1 11011011 101101 111 1 1111110 1011110 111 01 100 01 111111 101 101 11 01011 10 111111 11 11 11 10 10 10 1 10 1 101 010 1110 10110 10010 10110110 11010 0111 0111 11111 111 011 1 10110 1 1011 1011 111 1011 11 1010 111 111 1111 11 111 1101 1 1 1 1 1 1 11 1 1 11 11 111 1110 11 10 10100 10100 1110 01010 101 11 1 01 100 1010 1100 101 010 1 1010 11 11 111 1010 11010 11111 100 01 1101 11 010100111 11 100 1 11111 101 1 1111 1 1 101 1101 11 1 10101 1 11 11 11 11 11 11 11 11 11 11 11 11 11 11 11 1111010 1 1111 1 11111 11 1111 101 101 10011 11 10 10 10 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 1 11 1011 110 1 01 10 111 1 0 0 0 0 11 110 110 10 10 0110 10 1100 11111 100 11 11100 10 1 11011 1 1 1 10 10 01001 11101 1010 100011 11101 10 10 010001 1011 101011 011 1101 1010 11 1 111 1101 1010 10 1 011 1101 101 101 1 011 11 01 1010 111 111 01 101 011 110 101 110 1010 0101 0101110 1111 11001001111111101011010 11011110111111110 10110100101101101011101011111111 11111111010101011100111010101101010100100011
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 4,277
Words 815
Sentences 15
Stanzas 60
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 5, 3, 4, 2, 1, 1, 1, 4, 3, 7, 3, 4, 1, 6, 7, 4, 16, 2, 5, 1, 1, 15, 3, 12, 2, 4, 13, 4, 4, 2, 3, 7, 3, 17, 3, 2, 2, 2, 28, 1, 4, 12, 5, 4, 5, 3, 4, 3, 5, 5, 5, 4, 4, 5, 1, 1, 4, 1
Lines Amount 290
Letters per line (avg) 11
Words per line (avg) 2
Letters per stanza (avg) 54
Words per stanza (avg) 12
Font size:
 

Written on July 30, 2022

Submitted by ghirmay2.yukunno on July 29, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

4:07 min read
6

Discuss this Yukunno Ghirmay poem analysis with the community:

0 Comments

    Citation

    Use the citation below to add this poem analysis to your bibliography:

    Style:MLAChicagoAPA

    "BUTTER? CAMELS?!" Poetry.com. STANDS4 LLC, 2024. Web. 27 Apr. 2024. <https://www.poetry.com/poem-analysis/132717/butter%3F-camels%3F%21>.

    Become a member!

    Join our community of poets and poetry lovers to share your work and offer feedback and encouragement to writers all over the world!

    April 2024

    Poetry Contest

    Join our monthly contest for an opportunity to win cash prizes and attain global acclaim for your talent.
    3
    days
    10
    hours
    59
    minutes

    Special Program

    Earn Rewards!

    Unlock exciting rewards such as a free mug and free contest pass by commenting on fellow members' poems today!

    Browse Poetry.com

    Quiz

    Are you a poetry master?

    »
    The Baltimore Ravens’ team name was inspired by which American poet?
    A Edgar Allan Poe
    B Langston Hughes
    C Walt Whitman
    D Emily Dickinson