Analysis of BUTTER? CAMELS?!
Untimely visit
easier to marble
remains of
desired keep-away
comfortable story
received...prove
yoked humour
to prevent
poetry's blush
to roll apple
once more
dragged in glass
held help
involved involving
chances tone
surrounding
surrender
change to plate
'what am you..'
Need
dust a tree
Need, dust a tree
Need dust, a tree
Need, dust, a tree
floating
pardoning
awful degree awful extent
lawful degree lawful extent
to bear ringed
hinged thoughts
to applaud
entire prose
to eat
not
to live
prose
to eat
entire prose...
prose to eat
turn by turn
lovely pause, a pose
suppose
a repose expose impose
rim pose dim pose dispose
sim-pose sim-p-lose
hose was without... you tell
depose
prose
to eat note to live
not to leave
leave to leave
note to leave
till
tile rapid-tile rapid-trail tiles
reptile to slow repeat
pat pats tiles
sides
doubt to doubt doubt rare rarely
early to rare rare rarely
to rare rare
in-pair
empire
expire
for to tip is to tip
just a tip
just a lip
note, none
another than tip
speaking
its tips out till tip-lip
tip -deep
deep-tip
lip-tip
having
having
sighing
sigh
sigh-in
sign
mourning-mourn
the reality
or good morning
mourning or morning
mourning and morning
mourning but morning but morning
wronging one another
in front of them
in font of them
side of them...sign of them
sag of them
include of
them
morning or mourning
wronging
virtue of us
virtue of them
vice of us
service of them
ought nought
greeting greeting
fought f-nought
bought b-nought
c-ought c-nought
Faultless breast
not pat-turned
faultless governs breasts
faultless
fault
faultless
faultless
pat
pat
pat-ful
pats
patterning
pat-turn
pat-full
'I hate war
You -pat founder
-keep war'
feeling
pat-inferior
pat-superior
pat-ful complex
emitting suicide
lying lie
light mild
hotmailed
mirage
mirroring
wedding-parting
ring-marriages
to appease
the chirping
birds
for denying
their left
to sing
their right- out,
early evening
as early morning
why not I start, grab
borrowing
the string
of my 'guitar'
to dance
along the 'silencing' 'lull' or lull
'let's stop
mimicking
king
still it does not ring
our hands
first
th-o-nd
fifth
fourth
rhythmic notes
for we're asleep
when we
chirped
our very last
song
song dip
song tip
song tip
song deep
song song
song song
deep song
tip-pit
tip song
pit song
dip-pit
pit- dip
dip song
deep dip
dip deep
one on top of another
whose
tip was this pit
whose?
whose pit was this tip
whose lip
was this keep-deep
To disavow
to disallow
every first serd
fifth fourth
stanza
stitching
edges
of
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
keep
birds
birds-sakes
cut the whole cat
whose tipa..
losta
and founda
lipa
I'mnot your kee
PA
A
A
A
A
way called
good manner
good manor
matching
marking
'discount marching'
Witness,
as usual
ICE, this time - pure ice
sharpening
its edge
'May, my- enemy
building
you
out bouncing outdoor seat
cunningly
meaninglyessly
coffeeing
coffee
coffin
Intelligent flow
flow you farthest flow
lying errand
Scientist enough flow
flow you farthest flow
lying
errand
political enough
instinct-ly brief
worries trough the last laugh
A young dog
have had a chain
for a dinner
lunch time
breakfasteven
An old dog
have have a chain
for a breakfast
dinnertime
lunchbreakeven
A child dog
have have a chain
for a lunch
breakfast time
dinnerbreakeven
A young cat
have have
a chain
for a dinner
An old cat
have have have
a chain
for a lunch
A child cat
have envy
of a chain
or many
for a breakfast
A venture spring
Inspiration for this poem
I am Yukunno Ghirmay.
While walking around the canals ( of wharf/ of selearf/ of tearf) years before, around early evening-
I noticed that someone was crying his throat out for help- drowned or drowning.
Being new to the area, to the note, to the not, to the swimming thing, I was unable to watch what was happening....letalone to give hand.
Right then, I prayed someone to give hand and runaway from the episode for I couldn't believe I am unhelpful as the drowned person for another human variety and/or myself.
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Closest metre | Iambic dimeter |
Characters | 4,277 |
Words | 815 |
Sentences | 15 |
Stanzas | 60 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 3, 5, 3, 4, 2, 1, 1, 1, 4, 3, 7, 3, 4, 1, 6, 7, 4, 16, 2, 5, 1, 1, 15, 3, 12, 2, 4, 13, 4, 4, 2, 3, 7, 3, 17, 3, 2, 2, 2, 28, 1, 4, 12, 5, 4, 5, 3, 4, 3, 5, 5, 5, 4, 4, 5, 1, 1, 4, 1 |
Lines Amount | 290 |
Letters per line (avg) | 11 |
Words per line (avg) | 2 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 54 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 12 |
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Written on July 30, 2022
Submitted by ghirmay2.yukunno on July 29, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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