Analysis of The past (2)



Alas, the stagnant past,
Fell into utter darkness.
The heart is pounding,
Opening the closed door.

Alas, the starving past,
Ability is very limited.
The policy is worn out,
Thin and lean in half bed.

Alas, the unspoken past,
Written with an unclear mind.
From a lonely God,
Avatar of deviation.

Alas, the faded past,
The attainment is inlaid.
Deluded with situation comedies,
Worn out in childishness.


Scheme ABXX AXXX AXXX AXXB
Poetic Form
Metre 010101 1011010 01110 100011 010101 0100110100 0100111 101011 0100101 1011011 10101 101010 010101 001011 0101010100 1101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 404
Words 85
Sentences 8
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 16
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 79
Words per stanza (avg) 17
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Submitted by hakikur on July 22, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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