Analysis of forgotten moor 2



The spirets they gather on forgotten moor,
The ghosts of soldiers alive no more, Soldiers fighting polatitions war's,
All dead and buried on forgotten moor.

Our mothers at home lock the doors, There sons all dead remembered no more,
my father now crys for his missing son
a son who died becouse he belonged.

I wanted to be a brave son for mum,
i wanted to give up and lay down my gun,
i wanted a wife with eyes pale blue,
i wanted to die at 72,
They asked me to take the betelion forth ,
the battle ended breaking the dorn.
i held up my hands and i prayed to go0d
clossed my eyes and the bomb it dropped.

The spirets thyey gather on forgotten moor, to sing and dance and play til;l dawen.
a memory to soldiers lost at war.
the sodiers are sleeping on forgotten moor.


Scheme AXA BCX XCXXXXXX CBA
Poetic Form
Metre 0111010101 011100111101011 1101010101 101011101111101011 1101111101 01111101 1101101111 11011101111 110011111 110111 11111011 010101001 11111011111 11100111 011101010111010111 0100110111 0111010101
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 769
Words 166
Sentences 7
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 8, 3
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 35
Words per line (avg) 9
Letters per stanza (avg) 150
Words per stanza (avg) 37

About this poem

i wrote this poem about wr amd the ghosts it leavs behined. i submitted it about 10 uears ago but didnt ever find out what happend .

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Submitted by justinmorrison659 on July 16, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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