Analysis of Imagine

Douglas H. Mc Clintock 1934 (Sarnia, Ontario)



Can you ever imagine
When your life is or,
Knocking on Heaven's door
On that golden shore ?

I have tried the broken cisterns, Lord
And ah the waters fled,
Hearing the grim reaper whisper
Put your affairs in order !

To be an elder stateman for the Lord,
I have become a very captive audience
The Lord and me.
He talks with me, He walks with me,
And He tell me that I am His own !

We must accept the difficult with the good,
As a sojourner now we must realize
That the die has been cast and only ask
The strength to continue the journey !

What fools these mortals be
To think we should be carried on pillows of ease,
Give of yourself, and be your brother's keeper,
In giving we receive God's blessing !

So what is your life ?
Here today, gone tomorrow, like a vapor,
In time people will forget you,
But leave you mark as God is your Savior !


Scheme XAAA BXCC BXDDX XXXD DXCX XCXC
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 1110010 11111 101101 11101 111010101 010101 10011010 1101010 111101101 110101010100 0101 11111111 011111111 11010100101 1010011110 1011110101 011010010 111101 111111011011 11010111010 010101110 11111 1011011010 01101011 1111111110
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 846
Words 182
Sentences 8
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 5, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 108
Words per stanza (avg) 28

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Reliving our past now

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Written on July 14, 2022

Submitted by Dougla$Irishman on July 14, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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